That was good, a nice sci fi short story. You should have made the end paragraph:
"...He woke up at 7:00. He skipped his breakfast, changed his clothes and walked to school. He would have a normal day." <---(the end)
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Thanks! It ended on a cliff hanger. Notice how she called him "Daniel". Not Eric. Thanks again. Most people are too lazy to read alot.
Wow that was an amazing story.
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You must be bored to type all that in one session...
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Did you even read it? Also, I typed it on Microsoft first.